The Sharpest Lives
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- Fecha de creación: February 2007
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- The head hung before me. It hadn't been cut cleanly, the bottom edge of the neck that was dripping with blood was zig-zagged and uneven. There was blood pouring from it like a tap, forming a small river on the ground. It's eyes were wide open, staring at me with a glare of utter terror. It's mouth hung loosely open, as if having gone limp after a wild scream. The hiar and it's head was pulled up to hold it up, but matted with blood already starting to clot.
*That's the beginning to the opening to the story. It's not planned out or anything, so it may be suckish at first but give it time and I'll make it as bloody and horrific as you want
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Sorry for the slow update, thanks for reading! Hope you enjoy the next chapter.
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Mrs Brightsidehace 57 semanasMy story:
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A vampire story about a vampire who does all the things vampires aren't supposed to do... gives up blood, saves a human's life and falls in love... -
Samhace 82 semanasHey!
Absolutely Amazing!!
If You Want A Skin Then Im More Than Happy 2 Make Yuu 1
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Jimmie Oliverhace 87 semanasHey fellow-author,
If you are a self-respecting bookworm, then you could do a lot worse than read through extracts of my new book on www.bebo.com/JadedGoodie The 288-page publication can be ordered from Amazon, Blackwell or Waterstones and is due out at the beginning of March.
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KimberleyKodak.hace 99 semanasWOW.
Pure talent!
I love your book, its amazing!
Please have a look at my story,
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Its a really short horror story.
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Literary Maniahace 108 semanasEnthusiastic Reader? Budding Writer?
Then Check out Literary Mania, the cosmopolitan group for bibliophiles of all ages! A community with over 200 members, "The Literary Network" aims are to help our fellow members develop their writing skill, (whilst honing our own) and discussing and debating all types of literature!
Our Bebo group Provides a page to advertise your work, and we run a "Book of the Week", where each week members can nominate a story which they feel deserves the title of "Literary Mania BOTW". Voting takes place over the week and the winner is declared each sunday.
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Angel on the rockshace 108 semanasAngel is a teenage girl with alot of problems and alot of secrets.
Will her secret bouts of depression be the end of her?
Or will it be the pressure from her endless situations that eventually pushes her over the edge?
Or...will she stay strong, and let others fall around her? Her best friend for example
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Joehace 112 semanas!!!!!
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Billie Jean.hace 136 semanas
Hey that was F-A-B-U-L-O-U-S!! Like that was the best Bebo Book in Horror! If my computer would let me rate, I would rate you 5/5 but I can't! Sorry! It totally rocks though! Keep writing Chapter 3,4,5 and more PLEASE!! 
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MaTty Th Lawdhace 136 semanashey everyone go on it cool shit
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.....Blood.....Gore.....Guts......Classic horror! OMG!! The way you discribed the expression on the dismembered Head, was amazing. And the way you gave the murder an almost child-like innocence, was a master stroke. You are a true genius and an amazing writer. Please write more.
de Heather hace 30 semanasxxx <3 xxx
Heather
no words there are no words to say how awsome that was!!
de Alexis hace 35 semanasWOW!! Brilliant!!!! Will you be writing more? I really want to know what happens next!!!!
de Jez hace 41 semanasOH MY GOD!! Whens the next one?!!!!!
de N.Rivs hace 42 semanasOh my god!!
amazing, gripping, gory....
...your a true master of words!!!!!!!
very good! very discriptive and well written, it tells what the character is thinking. extremely gory though.
de Random Thoughts hace 73 semanaswow that's sooo gory, but really well written.......
de Captain Rosie hace 75 semanaswow truly gory story hun
de Public Display Of Awesomeness. hace 79 semanaskeep at it
wow liked ur story, i love this kinda thing!!
de ChainsawCrazy hace 79 semanaslots od blood, lots of guts, mint
wow i really liked your story. some peole will think i must be mad to love horror storys but something to do with all the blood makes me love them more. keep up the work.
de Lydia hace 89 semanasAmazing Wow this is a great story!
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de Filthy Victorian hace 92 semanasGereat language and good portrayal of a madman. And lovely descriptiveness, you MUST turn that into a published book, id read it in a second.
Brilliant! You deffinitely have talent! An awesome story!
de Demolition Lover hace 96 semanasCan't wait 2 read more!