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- Me, Myself, and I
- So it's romantic, but that's not where it stops.
Skye thought she was just a 'normal' girl, your typical red-blooded female. That was, until she turned 18. Then things started going badly wrong. But in a startling turn of events, she learns secrets about herself and her sisters that no amount of foresight could predict.
This doesn't appeal to you?... fair do's, but I dont want to hear about it - its like my normal profile, if you don't like it, if you dont like me, then fuck off and dont read it.
For those people who will actually read the story and have some knowledge of how a story should be written enough to leave a constructive comment, then you are welcome to my page. I welcome genuine criticism, but criticism for critisism's sake is just pathetic and I don't need it. Writing is one of my passions and I would love to take it further.
Thanks for reading and commenting,
Love
Shanelle
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Na na
Na na na na na
I miss you
I miss you so bad
I don't forget you
Oh it's so sad
I hope you can hear me
I remember it clearly
The day you slipped away
Was the day I found
It won't be the same
Oh
Na na
Na na na na na
I didn't get around to kiss you
Goodbye on the hand
I wish that I could see you again
I know that I can't
Oh
I hope you can hear me
I remember it clearly
The day you slipped away
Was the day I found
It won't be the same
Oh
I've had my wake up
Won't you wake up
I keep asking why
I can't take it
It wasn't fake
It happened you passed by
Now you're gone
Now you're gone
There you go
There you go
Somewhere I can't bring you back
Now you're gone
Now you're gone
There you go
There you go
Somewhere you're not coming back
The day you slipped away
Was the day I found
It won't be the same no...
The day you slipped away
Was the day that I found
It won't be the same oh...
Na na
Na na na na na
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67 weeks ago via Mobile
Leslie Mcvicker
sup yo :S how are you pimp out your profile with this site its sooocoool
copy and paste sick-offer.com laters
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Bebo-Books100 weeks agoJoin this new group & advertise your bebo books at the same time. It's only new so I need members.
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102 weeks ago
Freya Ione
heya
ur story iz amazing. I am also writing one ... www.Flyupinthesky.bebo.com
check it out i am re-writing it because from the third chapter it all gets boring seeing ur story if u had any ideas to help me dne i wuld appreciate it. thanx
keep writing uve deffinatly got talent!
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Rage Against The Helena113 weeks agoIts good! I liked it...
Could you guys check out my book with a bit of constructive critisism and your opinions.
Much appreciated!
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Forgotten-But-Never-Lost113 weeks agowen shes screaming she should fall off the sofa and James shud run out of the bathroom with nothing but a towel wrapped around his waist!!!
NO JOKE
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Shan.Elle118 weeks agoSorry about any confusion guys,
I'm still writing my new bit and it isn't done yet.
That's why it doesn't go with the first bit.
It'll all come to light soon enough,
Sorry again
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Corrina.118 weeks agoIf you love a good romance...check out my story.
Love's Waitress...
Story of love and friendship against the odds.
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OMG!!!!! Luved it. Absolutely LUVED it! Plzz, plzz, plzz write more. I wanna know wat happens next. Plzz!!!!
by SammiD' 18 weeks agoamazing this was amazing
by Paper Bags And Plastic Hearts 93 weeks agowow u should seriously think bout gettin this published
by Vampiress 96 weeks agowow that is amazing i have no other word for it
by Freya Ione 102 weeks agoWOW OMG! that was really great!!!!!
by Rachael 107 weeks agoI just love it, it's the best book I have read so far on bebo, and beleive me, I have read a LOT
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more!!!!
Dying to know what happens next!!
hi it is one of the best i ever read
by Justin C 108 weeks agoIt was good... ...but your writing style needs a bit of development. Find someone to write with, a friend or someone random off Bebo who has a diffrent not neccecarily better writer than you. Swap pieces of writing, chapters of your books/short stories and discuss them, and dont be afraid to try somthing new. That is the besat way to develop your writing style...I have tried and tested the method with good results. I know they are diffrent genrers but check out two of my books, the before and after and see how my style matured.
by Rachel Phipps 110 weeks agoBefore: http://kathryn-at-court.bebo.com
After: http://adam-fan-fic.bebo.com
Rachel
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Its good but... Its good but it doesnt go along with the front page so im confused. I think it will be a great book, I can tell. Keep up the good work.
by Kierra Martin 118 weeks agofrom a fellow writer
keep writing! thats great write some more!
by im just a little shy about i 118 weeks agoletter i love that it s so cool its about him and her love for each , its sounds like me and him too lots of love louise may oliver the sort thing me and him would do for eac other xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
by Luella 119 weeks agoxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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wow Oh my god
by Michelle Taylor 119 weeks agothe story was so moving but i want to read more, i want to know if james gets to her in time, or how he copes
it brought tears to my eyes
good luck on future stories
i loved it
Five star. Very very nice...looking forward to this James guy...
by Catherine 119 weeks agoShe got raped, right? From some drunk ass, right??
Oooh, very dramatic...
Update soon!!
Malinna