Love-is-like-a-Book
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- Profile created: February 2007
- www.bebo.com/love-is-like-a-book
- Category:
- Romance
- Publisher:
- Ingrid Paulino
- Me, Myself, and I
- The book is about a young girl who reads a romantic book and starts to cry because the same exact thing has happened to her. So then she thinks and starts to write a book, which gets published and becomes famous but threre still an empty whole in her heart and it just needs you.
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Fcuk The System97 weeks agoGreat story(:
Hope to see more laters xx.
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Roldy112 weeks agolove is a book huh so why cant i choose the ones i like
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CatEyes C131 weeks ago
Hi I am New To This Site.Please Add Me As U r Friend. .5/16/2007 6:14:31 PM
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CatEyes C132 weeks ago
Hello Just Chill5/16/2007 11:03:44 AM .5/16/2007 11:03:44 AM
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Jessica R132 weeks ago
U r lokking Kwel in the pic .shall we be frnds .5/15/2007 9:00:13 PM
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Anonimous135 weeks agoheya i like what you have written so far! its really good! Do you thnk you could take a look att mine and see what need to be addedc and improved as i havnt done much!??!
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if u do know then u see them to136 weeks agohey god job keep up writing get ur message across . i have plz check mine out
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Natasha Trod141 weeks agoid really like to hear more...plz post more...
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Henry142 weeks agolmfao.
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Melissa Mitchell142 weeks agodo wat u got to do gurl!
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.Jasmine.142 weeks agothis story sounds good so far i rite poems so i no wut writing is all about but this sounds good
KWL I THINK IT WAS RELE GOOD I LYKED IT VERY MUCH I HAD 2 PUT IT ON MY PAGE
by Canadian Emo Princess 114 weeks ago... Sorry, but this is nonsensical at best, poorly written and pretty much an unedited, unconsidered mess. While the plot idea may be good in theory, you obviously spent maybe 20 minutes on the entire piece of writing at best. There's no coherence, no obvious direction, no characterisation, no story. Consider seriously revising your writing style, pacing and how much time you actually spend on your writing if you want to get people to ENJOY your stories.
by Blue Noodle 119 weeks agox] The first chapter was very confusing. It was all meshed into one giant paragraph and half the time, I didn't know what was going on. I couldn't tell if she was writing the book or telling the actual story or what. There really wasn't much clarification at all.
by Michelle Lokket 131 weeks agoThe second chapter was also confusing. It was only, like, two sentences. And I had no clue who those people were! Of course, I knew they were her friends, but there wasn't enough introduction to the characters. You just threw them at me and I was left thinking, "Say whaaa?"
All in all, the idea isn't that bad. You just need to work on story format and building your characters, making them "real" so to speak.
Good job and good luck!
good good
by . 132 weeks agou should write more xx
=] Hey I really like the beggining of the story! I speak spanish so it's not too easy for me read stories in english but I wanna keep reading this! =]
by Takako 134 weeks agoGood Luck,
S.
Reli gud!!! Tat ws gud so far!!! right more!!!!!
by Fiona D 136 weeks ago