Distant Deceptions
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KK T116 weeks ago
cut and paste this link: http://www.yuwie.com/yuwie.asp?r=18346
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Erin130 weeks agoHey, thanks for letting me know.
'Simply Untitled' was really good, just like all of the others.
The 'book' is just a big group of ideas at the moment that need to be sorted out. I've got one major problem of getting from A to B which is proving difficult but I'll hopefully come up with something.
I'm not quite sure when I'll actually put anything down in writing. I want to be sure of everything before I do it. -
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Aj Doyle137 weeks agoshite ment to say like em
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Tea- Peace138 weeks agodo ye mean ye like them or do ya mean common now wat are ye at...
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Aj Doyle138 weeks agohey man really a proud nation and being human II
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Tea- Peace138 weeks agoi believe it was quite a collaberated effort on the original, but as you can see it is only the skeleton of that that remains....
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Laura O' Brien141 weeks agoHey, I'm impressed!
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Aurca Sun141 weeks agoHey, I really like it all...makes me reminiscent of the good old days in Gorey when I sat next to you in Maths and we talked about Philosophy. I really want to get back into writing and this has inspired me.
So, kudos to you, A.C.E.V (teehee
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Dude... alrite where to begin?
by Paul Begadon 78 weeks agowell firstly de main thing dat impresses me with ur work is how deep it all seems,
i really connected with it and i think u mite be one of dose few who sees de world in different shades than de masses.
think theres flashes of genious in ur work.
and dont write me off as a kiss-ass who praises u just becoz i didnt boder takin de time 2 actuly look between your lines...
anyway im becomin a fan and im gunna check back 2 see any of ur new stuff.
keep em comin.
if u wanted to take sum time to check out my work id really apreciate it
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any feedback wud be apreciated.
later dude
Cerebreal. You are definitely a brain, how long did you spend coming to the conclusions in your poetry? I like it all. The first two's sheer simplicity yet knocking power. Your poems are like eloquent arguments in a debate, as if you're trying to show the world the truth. Please keep going.
by Esmo 89 weeks agowww.bebo.com/littlerednotepad
:) Just.....WOW! absolutely brilliant poetry
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by .......... 116 weeks ago... ello.. firstly i'd like to say thank u 4 visit my page i love gettin comments and reviews..
by JustMe 134 weeks agoi realy enjoyed readin urpoems, the short ones have soething in them i cnt realy explain..
the longer are easy to connect with pplincluding me will be able to relate to ur work...
i think all your poems are very good and i thnk there is deff talend and emotion behind the words.. i;; b sure to visit again feel free to come n see me sumtime soon...
sarah...x*
hollow dreams
Again, and Again and..........? Again, and Again and..........? was fantastic, I really could understand and connect with that piece.
by Erin 137 weeks agoAll of your stuff is brilliant, I enjoyed reading every single one of them.
More please.
... whats tan talkin about????
by Eoin 138 weeks agoplagiarism he cries!!!!
the poems are cool man