Falling for the pirate
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- Me, Myself, and I
- Kayla Gemson a fun, smart and pretty 15 year old girl just loves adventure but could never find any in her village but when she's kidnapped by pirates and is forced to be apart of their crew not to mention being chased by a man called Shade for her powers of linity it's more than she could ever imagine!
Oh did I forget to mention her slowly falling for a super cute/sweet guy named Night to add to the chaos!!
Will she tell him how she feels?
Who is Shade?
What is Nights past?
Will Kayla ever go back to having a NORMAL life???
This is a very anime styled book a Adventure,Fantasy,Romance type please comment about the book!
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Hey Everyone
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Hope you liking this book so far! I know I haven't been writing much but I will try to keep going and please mail with your ideas ands what you think of my writing thus far.
I have a lot of ideas that make it that much harder too be able to finish up the story but I guess that gives me material for a part two aswell.
Well I just thought I'd check in with everyone.
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Characters!!
Kayla: The main character of the story, She has brown and medium long hair with tanned skin. She has brown eyes which give a look of innocence. She stands up for herself and is confident in what she does.
Night: Pitch black, short hair that spikes to the side with tanned skin and brown eyes. He's also fit and usually wears his long, brown buckle jacket and black trousers.With his belt that carries his sword.
He's a smooth talker who can be cheeky and idiotic at times but sweet at others.
Sasha:Her Long, light brown hair that could be mistaken for red and very energetic and fun personality has her being very hyper active. She has brown eyes and light tanned skin and wears her red checkered top the shows most of her stomach and black singlet underneath that ties up at the front that matches her denim short shorts.
Lita: She has long,golden blonde hair and tanned skin but still light. She has blue eyes and a fit body that comes in handy being a pirate. She's confident and bubbly.
Jake: He has blonde short hair that spikes upwards. He has lightly tanned skin and is in good shape. He has brown eyes and usually wheres a white shirt and blue pants that tuck into his boots.
Pete:Has brown hair that flows freely with his light brown eyes and tanned skin that makes him look sweet. He likes to order people around and protect people too.
Shade: Evil Evil Evil!!! He looks nearly the same as Night except he has white hair and looks older. He wear a white sort of Armour that covers most of his body.
Maria: His loyal servant and follower,She has long black hair and Green eyes with her grey skin colour and fit body makes her appear ......different?
Ray: With his short blonde, flowy hair and deep blue eyes and a smile that could melt a girl could make you faint 3 times over. With his smooth talking attitude and cheesy lines just add to his dreamyness.
Shadis:lets see HUGE breast causing any guy to stare and every girl to hate! Not to mention her Blonde hair and fit figure! She goes around flirting with any guy she wants.0 Comments 586 days
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Okay lets see!!..
Hey guys just writing a update
The books coming along well, I just have so many things I want to happen that I don't know where to begin! And I think I might make a second book to continue this one MAYBE!
that's if people want me too or if they just want the story to end
I don't really have much to say I was just giving an update
Thank for the reviews!
really REALLY appreciated!!
and please comment if you have any questions or suggestions
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Bebo Request Reviews32 weeks agoNOT SPAMMING!
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PsychopathicG35 weeks agoWhoa how come youre so good n im crap *Sits and sulks*
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Weight of the World
Love the book, really good writing. Could you read mine please
Phoenix thought she was normal, that her parents were really killed by a robber. But when she moves to the new town with her Uncle Logan. Her life is turned upside down, she meets Dante for the first time, yet it feel like she has known him forever, and the wierd dreams of a strange man by the name of Dagen. What is going on.
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Yunä Summõner Óf Yevón41 weeks ago
Well you're welcome
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Misunderstood Dreamer
Heya,
I just wanted to say that out of all th books I've read on bebo (and I've read a lot of them
you're the only one who updates regually, which is very good because if I had to wait 5 weeks for the next chaptor of another book that I liked I would definitly go mad!
So, yeah, thanks
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Yunä Summõner Óf Yevón43 weeks ago
Just checking in and saying thanks for reading my story!
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- Barakah49 weeks ago
Like is a slight understatement, but, oh well.
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Xx Raawwrr Kitkat Bunny52 weeks agoSkulls is a goth. someone who keeps herself to herself. unti one day there is a new boy- Mike at her school.
"I have had a feeling, something’s not right about him. I just can’t put my finger on it!"...
Skulls doesnt know what it is...but she is soon to find out there is more to Mike than meets the eye.
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Nicole Love'S Theimagination
heys!! here is a book i am begining to type up
just a quickie
http://www.bebo.com/loveorfun
my others arent ready yet
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Nicole Love'S Theimagination60 weeks ago
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Nicole Love'S Theimagination60 weeks ago
OH NO!!!!!
wot will she do????
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Naomi B61 weeks agoloved it when she was arguin with her concines
and great storyline
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Nicole Love'S Theimagination62 weeks ago
LOL aaaahhh the uniform.....
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Nicole Love'S Theimagination65 weeks ago
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Yunä Summõner Óf Yevón66 weeks ago
Wish everyone was like you Nyaa~!!
dat was great please finish it-i want 2 know wat happens next.
by Nicolee 23 weeks agoit was so great.
PLZZZZZZZ WRITE MOREEEEEE OTHERWISE I SHALL HUNT U DOWN AND MAKE U WRITE MORE HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEEEEEEEEE THEY NEEE DTO KISS MORE
by D I D I 24 weeks agoVery nicely done You certainly do have a lot planned out for poor Kayla! I feel for her on that, but the one thing that set my mind back was how quickly her and the pirates got along, but other than that it's really good!
by Samantha 31 weeks agoCheck out mine?
www.bebo.com/they-always-know
Thanks ^^
Bebo Request Reviews Bad points first because then it can only get better
by ThatGirl 31 weeks ago~ Don't write "!!!" or "!?!?" Just because you do (I do too) it on MSN its not really gramatically correct
~ More physical description of the characters and the places they go to
~ "BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA *breath* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH"<----Sasha but even longer Ok, im sorry but I hate this bit. The "<---" doesn't work in a story
and now on to the brilliant bits
I like how you go straight into the story by the first chapter as I hate stories that don't get into the plot for ages. It was unique - honestly like nothing I have ever read on here before, in a good way. I'm generally ot interested with anime-style stories so I was suprised at this. I like the different personalities of the characters -especially Night (for obvious reasons) and the fact that he reminded me of a friend. Finally I also loved the inevitabilty that Kayla and Night will get together (please say they will)
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awesome i loved it, please hurry and continue... i really really loved it!
by Mash Reneau 38 weeks ago... the first four or five chapts were a bit iffy, but im glad i kept reading.
by Holly. 39 weeks agoonce i got used to ur style of writing it was really enjoyable, write more soon!!!!
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by The Flash 45 weeks agoawsome!!! wooowww this story is waaaaayyyyy goood
by Hodge. 53 weeks agoyou should well wright more !
i loved it
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awesome this story is so addicting. ive read it before but i had to read it again. its that good!!! u need to write more soon. i know u just added some but its getting so so.. more aweswumer!!!!!!!! i love it. everything went to gether really well. just a few errors but hey they dont bother me
by Rosalie Hale 55 weeks agoloooooooooovvvvvviiiinnnnnn iiiiiiitttttt!!!! I ABSOLUTLY LOOOVVVEEEDDD IT!!!!
by Nicola 55 weeks agoit savage one of the best ive read so far!!XxXxXxXxXxXx!!!
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read over it and fix mistakes!!!!
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inspering awzom keep up the good work
by Naomi B 61 weeks agoKEEP GOIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! amazin stuf!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
by Elizke 61 weeks agolovin ya ritin, u hav so mch potential!
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