Fallen Phoenix
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- Profil utworzony: October 2007
- bebo.gazeta.pl/AJSGPNTK
- Kategoria:
- Biografie
- Motto
- Unspoken words
- Ja, o mnie i jeszcze raz ja
- This is my mixed up view of the way things were......... I think, but i'm not sure. Its a strange version of something that was, of the way people were, the way people could be, well, at least I think it could have happened but my memory is hazy so it is possible that it didn't happen at all and this isn't here and you arn't actually reading this and this blog page doesn't exist and neither does this book so watch out, you could just be going mad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hey, to everybody that even looked at my page thanks, but to the people who took the time to comment, post a review or become a fan, I can't say thanks enough to you guys because I didn't expect your response to be as it is.......Thank You........
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Panic! At The Disco - Lying Is The Most Fun A Girl Can Have Without Taking Her Clothes Off
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What do you think of my poems ?
- Crap
- Take them away, they insult the page
- OK (just)
- Leave the poetry to the professionals
- Not too bad
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Laughter
They couldn't leave me alone, just for one day, just for one hour, they kept coming, taunting, I don't know, quite possibly, but it was their laugh that kept me awake all night, it was the laugh that signalled their arrival, it was their laugh that sent shivers up and down my spine, it was their laugh that I could never forgive !!!!!!!!0 komentarze 764 dni
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Loved and lost
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Last resort
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Troubled
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Hugh
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Not quite whole
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Goodbye
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Depression
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She knows
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Gradual realisation
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Dreams
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Drugs
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Noise
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Jaydzabeth108 tygodni temuheyy
i like ur poems but i think you should reli try some rhyming. get ur own rhythem instead of story-like poems.
and the one that is untitled, do what i do most of the time and just take a line of word out of the poem and use that. you could use things like "why coudn i see it?" or "immortalised" stuff like that.
good luck
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That Random Guy109 tygodni temuMan,
If You Can Get Your Word Out,
This Page Would Thrive.
Your Poems Are Written With Passion,
& Nothin Comes Above That.
Check Out My Page,
Peace Out,,








Your poems Thankz for your poetry link. I have'nt been able to read all of poems but from what i have seen so far your an excellent poet. Like i said i think your like allpoetry. I also think your poetry will go far on allpoetry. If you do join please may i have your username to read the poems that you do on there (if you join that is)
przez Sailor 108 tygodni temu