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- When love is your enemy will you chose to trust your heart or your destiny
- Me, Myself, and I
Since the dawn of time, many stories have unfolded in this world, hidden from society. In the darkness where we cannot see, forces work to change the destiny of mankind. Every one hundred years a chid is born destined to protect mankind from forces that seek to corrupt the heart of light. In this new generation the circle has been disrupted, twins now share the fate of keeping the balance between light and darkness. On a misty September 21st their story began to unfold with the passing of an old man and the cry of a new born. Two new born’s.
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Favourite April and Drake moment
- Dark Ally-- Chapter seven
- Forbiden love--- Chapter Fifteen
- Vindication--Chapter twenty
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- Drake Avier
- Rebecca Avier
- April
- Jason
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WOWO Wow, that is amazing!
by Innocence Is Out Of Style 11 weeks ago
How the hell can you write so good! Im totally sucked in now and want more haha.
I would buy that anyday! Friggin phenomenal writter!
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I <3 Darcey more than you do. Yeah..
by Khemical Kawaii 38 weeks ago
What the title says..
And it's awesome...
SUMMER JAM IN TWO DAYS!!!!!
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im usually a tough marker but i am giving you brownie points for impressing me Bone chilling i wasnt expectign it to end like that i always thought ok here comes jarred to save the day....but wows O.o
by Neko 43 weeks ago
description was tops! and suspenceful
and you kinda feel sorry for serena in the end she never got to voice her feelings that is one of the mostpainful regrets a human can have
chap 15
steamy!!!
the build up of tension is finally released in a frenzy of passion!!
but not the sleazy sort the i love you so much i cant get close enough to you but i must stop before i kill you sort of passion...which of course makes the lust just that much more.
like u said its forbidden
im also pleased to note that i dont have to tell you to add more description and less talking like may people make the mistake of doing like the "hi how are you"she said "good" he replied ugh i hate that
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Unlimited is AMAZING!! I can honestly say that their arent enough words to describe how remarkable your book is. Your optical portrayal of the characters are dead right, allowing the reader to really understand them and the plot.
by Sharmane 45 weeks ago
The hunters & becca are personally my favourite characters with their uncanny abilities and their diverse personalities. Becca being so optimistic, that its beginning to rub off on me
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The whole Forbidden love thing between april and drake is very captivating.
Of course resulting, in my favourite chapter being number 15. very, very, HOT!
Also the relationship and dialogue between her and her brother is hilarious.
Overall i think your book is miraculous and i believe that you definitley will make it big one day, god only knows you deserve to with writing abilities such as yours. And i cant wait for it to be published.
ALL THE BEST!!
xoxo
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black rose, my rose
Black Rose
My rose
By the morning, I will be yours for life
by the night I will be the death of you I am the end
of all you hold near I am a dream of the end of you
I am the sun rising up tearing through all the pain
fading out in the dark,chasing my heart in vain
My black rose is the only thing I cling to
A tainted Heart, so dead and broken like you
till I found you
I give you a rose my only rose
By the moonlight, I will taste the sweet scent of crimson
blood trickling down from the morning after all has fallen
I am the death hanging over you I am the wiind tearing you
in two I am the hunt that calls to you
the intsticts making you want me to die
Come on
come
take me down
bite this and sever the life from me taste my blood and make me scream let me fall at your feet I give
you this rose, my only rose2 Comments 309 days
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"my rose" preformed by black rose, for unlimited
I know your watching me from the shadows
I hear your gentle breathe, I feel your touch
nothing else tastes as this does
this is wrong but so right causing me to hate
who I am and what I am all because of destiny
I fall for you forever
I give you my rose, this scarlet imperfection, my
body and soul a gift like no other a break in the
chain of who I am.
I see something that I shouldnt, I feel somehting
tell me if its real or not, will you give me something
and show me what you are and what I need is to
find someone that makes me need this, a drug I cant defy
love of the darknesss will you take me
My rose, a start of a flame and a piercing desire today I run
to where my dreams culminate
In your amrs
ohhh the black rose that is my life0 Comments 309 days
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Characters.....
Each and every character in Unlimited is entirly original and completly diferent from each other. Unlimited is my brain child and my baby so any way here is the complte break down of my characters
Hunters
April and Jason
April and Jason are twins born on septermber 21st a day that created a spanner in the works of a myth, The myth is a child would be born evey hundred years with powers so supernatural but with April being a twin it means h Jason became one as wwell and now they are the destined Darkness Hunters....
The Aviers
Drake Aviers
Becca Aviers
Adrian Aviers
These three are the anicent vampire legend of sunwalkers.these vampires are seductive illusive and dramatic, Drake is known as the prince of vampires he is seven hundred years old
Adrian the eldest is a thousand years old and beca is almost seven hundred years old
they are a very unique family.
Drake and Aprils relationship bcomes twisted and passionate is it explodes from rivalry to love
to find out more please read...........0 Comments 337 days
Freaking fantastic!!
i love it hahaha
i wanna read more than eight chapters though
are there any more?
how do i get to them??
wow, thanks for the invite
this is brilliant, x
Darcey This Is Well Good
There is nothing there at the moment but I do believe you should add
I Love You Darcey!!!!! xD
GO SEE OR DIE!! *seriously*
http://www.bebo.com/Life-Is-Short-x
I love you Darcey!!!!
GO SEEE THIS!!!! Theres not very much there atm but i'm getting there.
http://www.bebo.com/annericeisgod
you advertised on a page nd i read the quote and oh my god i HAD to see what it was
go vampires are wicked
Hey~a!
It's me Julie!!
Nehehehe Reading the book now!
Oh Add my rp page ^^ Fankiees
yeah all good.congratulations man, i cant wait to read it
sup man tina here sounds like an interesting read you didnt tell me it was yours. your a very talented writer
I know you say you will never compete with Stephanie Meyer which i admire but your amazing, Buffy meets twilight and i say this with no doubt
you broke the limits of twilight and made one hell of a series cant wait till its published!!!
Hannah number one fan!!!